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It wait's in the darkness
Like some kind of monster.
I know it's there.......
Only because it talks to me
I wait for it
then listen.....
It knows me inside and out.
Sometimes it's a friend
but recently it Frightens me.
Then it befriends me.
Then.......it hurts me...
When this happens
I know not what it is....
It use to be a friend.....
Someone I could call to.
Someone who would listen.
Even now it listens....
not only to me...............
But to you as well.
Temptation
Temptation is its name....
And also its purpose............
It's a poem I wrote late last night
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carrotbob Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2005
i think that this is a very expressive poem of how you felt at that moment in time. its very gd. personally i like the dots at the end of some of the lines making you focus on them.
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carrotbob Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2005
i think that this is a very expressive poem of how you felt at that moment in time. its very gd. personally i like the dots at the end of some of the lines making you focus on them.
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TheLeprechaunBandit Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2005
I like it oodles. Tre cool and rather chill-i-fying.
:)
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deaf-leopard Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2005
I think you pull off poetry a lot better than art.. right now, anyway. Keep posting your art though.
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great-gallows Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2005
*applause* i liked it, and you did a good job on the end.
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